Dear jackJack,
howHow are you? I hope you are finewell. I’m writing this email to saytell you about how i and my mother and I organized a 70th birthday party offor Mr.chandrasiri Chandrasiri, who is my grandfather. EverythingThe planning started 3 months before his birthday, when he telephoned my mom saying that he would love to have his 70th birthday but because we all knew that this was his last birthday. As you know, jackJack, my grandfather is in a terrible health situation, and even the doctors said that he won’t live for longmuch longer.
1One month before before the birthday party, we started with to organize. Actually, it was very difficult to organize a party from italy to sri lanka. fortunatelyin Sri Lanka from Italy. Fortunately my mother hasmother's her brother and her best friend live in sri lanka whichSri Lanka and they wanted to help us to organize thisthe party. then iMy mother and and my motherI then gave them some ideas. For an example: places to order food, invite my grandfather's friends to invite, gamegames to entertain ext.etc. Before 1One week before the party i and, my mother and I , along with her brother and her best friend had a video conference to see whether they forgot somethinganything. Honestly, my uncle and my mother’s best friend createdwere a great team, so everything was going well. finallyFinally, the day we all were waitingawaiting arrived. weWe telephoned ourmy grandfather to make greetingsgreeting him during the celebrations and we waswere very happy. I will let you know what happened inat the party whenafter my grandfather will callcalls me because i’mI’m writing this email the day after the party.

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