Bobby Braun builds an argument to persuade his audience that the UsUS Government must continue to invest in NASA. Bobby shares how aerospanceaerospace is a strong componantcomponent of the national fabric and the largest posotivr contributerpositive contributor to the nation’s trade balance. He explansexplains this statement by sayong howsaying that NASA’s technology will continue to mmakemake a difference in the world, and form a foundation for humanity;shumanity's next great leap, and national security.
Bobby
explansalso explains how in the past NASA was supported by a president which madewho believed the agency's success would have a huge impact on the country's economy. He says theBut, he adds, NASA is not just forabout space exploration, butcreatingit also operates towards the creation of a better world.: “National security and geographical landscape of time”(paratime” (paragraph 8). Bobby sharedgoes on to share that theyNASA has also have made the United States a safesafer place, whicha claim that persuades his audience to lean his wayrely on him for safety.
Bobby
leanedmade people his wayagree with him by enlighteningmaking the future generationslook promising. If NASA is fundedreceived more funds, they could create new technologies forto allow the next group of peoplegenerations to accomplish great things. HeWhen he says “humanity’s“Humanity’s great leap across the solar system”(parasystem” (paragraph 7), he makes a point that the future starts today; so, they could have aif we wanted to be able to leap across the solar system in the future, we would have to start working on it now. There can’t be any advanementsadvancements without the technology provided, and NASA need to keep that is providedthem coming if they want to stay relevant and make all their work worth the trouble.
Bobby
say thesays that technology investments continue to make a difference in the world. Any, any type of advancements makeadvancement gives a difference likecontribution - medical or wind generated, wind-generated energy, like e states in paragraph 6etc. (paragraph 6). He sells his opinion by attachingmaking it tonot only relevant for the audiences needs he addresses, but also leveraging their emotions.
Bobby
persuadesmakes his audiencepoint by sharing how they needstating that technology advancments,advancements are not only necessary but essential to the US if Americans want to warrant a future, and to feel safe in their country.

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