Yesterday, at 1 pm, I was goigwent to the park. There I was meetingmet a beautiful girl. She, who was sitting next to me , so I was startingstarted a conversation. I was talkingtalked with her about animals and school. She was Finn, so she was teachingtaught me some Finnish words. When I was talking with sheher, a tall man comewalked up. TurningIt turned out it wasto be Max ironsIrons, and he was her dad ! I was excitingexcited, because he wasis my idol. This was the best day inof my life.life!

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