hHi, there!
My disastrous holiday happened two years ago when
iI was oin iItaly.
One day
, we went with my mMum and dDad to ithe Italian mountains to climb up. It was very sunny so we thought the weather iwas OK for climbing.
When we were
onat the top of a mountain thean earthquake began. Hillsides began to disintegrate.
We wanted
to walk daown, but the alert forbadisqualified us. They said "wWe will send a helicopter".
In the end we were
back in the hotel, but this adventure was terrible.
Bye for now,
XYZ

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