Hi Jody,

Yes, I got your original email with the proposed controls
, but I know is how you wrote the previous section and what controls you used. I need that information to complete the last question. Otherwise, I can write it with what I think, but then the editor will most likely need to change a significant portion, due to the fact that The question asks me to comment on the trade-offs of the controls applied in the previous question.

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