“One can not think well, love well, sleep well, if one has not dined well.,” said Virginia Woolf. This proves thowe important is thce of lunch time, but Wwhat happens if you cadon't have this time?
Although sStudents at Cascade High School are frustrated with the lunch lines because Iit takes too long time and the lines aren’t organized. This problem makes students feels lost between the messy like a Rrock and Rroll concert.
To begin with
, lunch lines at Cascade High School are not organized because the schools has an estimate of more than 1000 students, and the place is too small. For example, every time that it is lunch time, the cafeteria is too busy with students and nobody can walk because there areis no space.
Also the lunch lines are too long,
twhisch mcakuses frustrations iamong students because the time isn’t enough.
The lLunch time is likeabout 30 minutes, but the time that the student lostes in the line is an estimate of 10 through 15 minutes. The remaind finallyg 15 minutes isare not enough to finish and enjoy your food.
In conclusion
, many Bruins have problems with the lunch lines, and they feel frustrated with the maessy and the time that they loste.
Cascade High School ha
ves just 2two lunch time,s; one of the better solutions could be. Ato add another lunch time,. tThis would means that, the number of students in every lunch time will be less.
The aAnother solution could be to enlarged and implement the cafeteria wand implementh more tables and a variety of food,. tThis means that, if CHS has a big cafeteria, ist will not be necessary to add another lunch time because there will be more space for more tables.

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