‘‘Everything happens for a reason," my grandma said,
" Yeah right,
’’" I said to myself, I kind of believed it though, but, I ignored what she
said because it seems like everything was going smoothly with my family, well, I thought it
was. I woke up to the view of the sun rising on a cold winter morning
,. I could not stop staring
at the sun
;, glowing brightly into my light brown eyes, but, I wanted to stop, besides I was
getting bored from looking at it and it was really hot, I said jokingly and my eyes were
burning
,. I made a joke about it because the sun is actually hot,. Get it? But, it was not funny, I
chuckled
,. aAnd I have no interest about the sun anyways,. It was 5AM.00am on December 25, 2013,. I was
in my room and my parents were in their room;
Tthe Christmas presents wasere all I could think
about.

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